A1: Of course I'm going to go with the highly saturated keyboard as the most visually striking. It's very bright and a good use of complementary colors. *Hi-five*
A2: Of the pages that have been fully digitalized, I'd say that the 20:00/half-color page is the least visually striking. It's not necessarily a bad thing, it illustrates a really quiet, calm place.
A3: I think the flow is pretty good. Without looking at the prompts, I can figure out what the "story" is. I don't know that I like the angles on some of the photos. It seems to make the flow stop in the middle with the horizontally framed keyboard.
Jess, -I love your last composition. The bright yellow of the window is a harsh contrast to the cool, dark blue that makes up most of the image. It's very striking and draws the viewer's eye to that specific spot. -The last composition was the least visually striking to me because of the minimal contrast between the colors used. The overall cool color scheme does not stand out as much. -The flow of the project was pretty easy to follow. It seems like we're following you going through a typical day at Drexel. However, the second photo kind of threw me off since all the other ones look traced, while this one looks hand drawn.
Jess A1: I think the most visually striking piece is the final one, the warm vs. cool colors. The dark blue and the bright yellow work really well together here, and it really helps to make this piece stand out from the rest. A2: The least visually striking piece to me would have to be the third, the green one. Most of the other pieces are stylized in one way or another, but this one just seems like a normal photo with a green filter on top of it. A3: There's a lot of straight lines that help guide your eyes through the piece from left to right which works really well for the flow of the project. I also like how mostly all the pieces are relaxing to look at, but the middle really jumps out with the super saturated blue and green vibrating edge effect.
Jess A1: The most visually striking for me was your middle page with the highly saturated blue and green, I think it portrays the brightness of an early day well and it is just nice to look at, especially with the yellow light far in the distance. A2: The least visually striking would be the third page, specifically because it does not look complete, therefore it does not read as good as the others. Though the monochromatic green concept still works with it. A3: For continuity, I would say your images have sufficient horizontal and diagonal lines that effectively guide the eye through the book though I think the final image is a bit steep compared to the others (referring to the implied lines of the image).
A1: Of course I'm going to go with the highly saturated keyboard as the most visually striking. It's very bright and a good use of complementary colors. *Hi-five*
ReplyDeleteA2: Of the pages that have been fully digitalized, I'd say that the 20:00/half-color page is the least visually striking. It's not necessarily a bad thing, it illustrates a really quiet, calm place.
A3: I think the flow is pretty good. Without looking at the prompts, I can figure out what the "story" is. I don't know that I like the angles on some of the photos. It seems to make the flow stop in the middle with the horizontally framed keyboard.
Jess,
ReplyDelete-I love your last composition. The bright yellow of the window is a harsh contrast to the cool, dark blue that makes up most of the image. It's very striking and draws the viewer's eye to that specific spot.
-The last composition was the least visually striking to me because of the minimal contrast between the colors used. The overall cool color scheme does not stand out as much.
-The flow of the project was pretty easy to follow. It seems like we're following you going through a typical day at Drexel. However, the second photo kind of threw me off since all the other ones look traced, while this one looks hand drawn.
Jess
ReplyDeleteA1: I think the most visually striking piece is the final one, the warm vs. cool colors. The dark blue and the bright yellow work really well together here, and it really helps to make this piece stand out from the rest.
A2: The least visually striking piece to me would have to be the third, the green one. Most of the other pieces are stylized in one way or another, but this one just seems like a normal photo with a green filter on top of it.
A3: There's a lot of straight lines that help guide your eyes through the piece from left to right which works really well for the flow of the project. I also like how mostly all the pieces are relaxing to look at, but the middle really jumps out with the super saturated blue and green vibrating edge effect.
Jess
ReplyDeleteA1: The most visually striking for me was your middle page with the highly saturated blue and green, I think it portrays the brightness of an early day well and it is just nice to look at, especially with the yellow light far in the distance.
A2: The least visually striking would be the third page, specifically because it does not look complete, therefore it does not read as good as the others. Though the monochromatic green concept still works with it.
A3: For continuity, I would say your images have sufficient horizontal and diagonal lines that effectively guide the eye through the book though I think the final image is a bit steep compared to the others (referring to the implied lines of the image).
Jess
ReplyDeleteA1: The warm vs Cool color concept page looks awesome and it is very visually striking.